So, now that Damon and I have successfully concoted two back-and-forth style poems, we thought it'd be fun to put them up on a blog so you guys could read them if you like.
Here's the first one we did, titled "House of Cards". It started with me writing a poem in math class, and in Spanish I passed it to Damon. He responded with two four-line stanzas, and it went on from there. The rhyme scheme jumps around, but I was excited by how it turned out. Purple represents my writing, and green Damon's.
House of Cards
This careful balance is a house of cards
Every move's a danger, we must keep our guard
I'm not sure how much longer I can live vicariously
Trapped in a state of uncertainty
How much higher will you stack the cards?
Everything's fine, you're making this too hard
But I can't pull back your hand, it's far too late
Any quick movement could be your last mistake
You know the time's past to change your mind
So you pretend that everything is fine
Come on, we both know this is how we'll die
You know I know, so you might as well explain why
The cards, they wobble as you remove your hand
As our eyes meet, I can tell you understand
You lean forward; I want to look away
But now that it's over I find that I can stay
Your fist hits our precarious structure
As each card falls, I feel my heart rupture
Blood seeps through my clothes, through yours
We grasps hands and close the final door
Part 2
Why a house made out of cards?
It seems a little unnerving,
That this all has to be so hard
When my resolve for you is unwavering
Why don't we start this all anew?
Switch cards for strong bricks
To always support you,
When nothing else will do the fix
But you've spent so long building
Our house out of thin little strings
To take it down one by one could be difficult
What horror a collapse could bring!
I trusted you to take care of us
And I trust you to this day
If this path was always our destiny
They from me there will be no dismay
If collapse is what we wish not of
Then bad, would be a house of strands!
This, my peace offer, my dove
A strong base of my bare hands
Better for which to start your trust,
On a foundation as of stone
I believe and agree you must,
That life is faced better, when not alone